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[心情随笔] I can feel

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发表于 2011-07-23 11:37发布于 07-23 11:37 较早前 |只看该作者
Those subtle change

Love you more and more

Do not go to think too much

Tell myself,loves you is enough

Occasionally lonely,in a person think of you

Want to know,would you also so want to me

But i know,i should not too crave

At dawn,in the middle of the night,in the second walked slowly across every corner

With all the,about missing for you

Write into a song

Gently singing

Actually i know distance will produce

I'll tell myself don't think about it too much

Those who have about love and separate reality

Not that i don't know

But i would rather blind

Actually,i want to tell you

Becasue i love you,let me find many of the meaning of life

I always waiting for your call remembers

Selfish think twenty-four hours occupy you

That i always feel disappointed

I know you are sometimes very love me

But sometimes you also let me very moment

Not i think too much,i can feel it

Feeling can't cheat people

I never thought we would magnificent and victorious love for life

I just want to do my best

Let love becomes affection

We all become an integral part of life in each other

Come on,come on

Really love a,complaint or regret

--Give my favorite you...
没有一个人,会一直一个人。

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楼主 | 发表于 2011-07-23 11:39发布于 07-23 11:39 较早前
当感情,从新鲜期步入冷淡期,我该如何做好防护工作?

每天.除了失魂落魄的想念,还能做些什么,来讨得你开心?
没有一个人,会一直一个人。

没有天堂,我只有走进深渊!

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发表于 2011-07-27 01:56发布于 07-27 01:56 较早前
表示看不懂 既然进来了就要留下点足迹
努力睁开眼睛,想要捕捉你身影,却被炽热的光灼痛了眼眸!

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发表于 2011-07-28 14:41发布于 07-28 14:41 较早前
论坛里有很多这样的例子,你喜欢的如果是中年人,他们有自己的家庭,经历了那么多,那样也就不奇怪了。如果倾注的太多,到时候楼主自己可能会遍体鳞伤的……

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发表于 2011-07-29 08:15发布于 07-29 08:15 较早前
恋爱的感觉很幸福

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发表于 2011-07-29 16:54发布于 07-29 16:54 较早前
It’s a subtle change , S8 ?; E# h r. [

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Telling myself, I love you that is enough+ V3 {6 e* V" n( ^6 E! s- u, X M

Occasionally, I feel lonely with is always in a person miss you.

I understood you , did you understand me, too ?

I known that I couldn’t too stubborn e6 ^( i7 I1 u7 i+ Y

The second time I slowly walked every corners at mid-night or morning

With all the scenes triggered me miss you so much

Writing all my miss into a song with sweet romantic feeling " u4 q/ {1 p& l! x- \$ E- ^" S2 X

I understood actually distance existed among us 8o4 w+ g) B7 I' ]

I'll tell myself that don't think about it too much

Who has had her/his lover and deemed to separate each other what is a fact

I don’t know . 2 u* h1 ^' q; r" H* c+ d- b

But I preferred to keep a silence

As matter of fact , I am dying to pour-in my views to you

Because I loved you and you let me found many meanings of life

I am always waiting for your call , did you ever feel ???" G/ m& a+ J; T

It’s a selfish think what I want to occupy (around) you with twenty-four hours l) a. w! o

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I know that sometime you are very love me2 Y% M5 x5 V( I" I$ y( c

But sometimes you also let me very painful .

Not ,I think too much trivial matters around you that I can deep feeling

Feeling can't cheat anyone w. B1 n( n9 t9 x

I have never been thought what our love should be achieved in real life one day .# Q2 _& S# j' `3 u1 U R5 h: F

I just would like to do best when you around me ?8 c( R S5 B. Y8 J- K

Let our love become affection( z: |3 _# b' n1 R3 r0 `

We all enter each other of the life

Come on, come on …..Honey

Remember , The true love without complaint or regret j+ w1 f

% V3 R& l' e D3 M5 -- Take my love to you, Honey

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发表于 2011-07-29 16:56发布于 07-29 16:56 较早前
It’s a subtle change ,

But Let me further loved you

You did not think too much'

Telling myself, I love you that is enough

Occasionally, I feel lonely with is always in a person miss you.

I understood you , did you understand me, too ?

I known that I couldn’t too stubborn

The second time I slowly walked every corners at mid-night or morning

With all the scenes triggered me miss you so much

Writing all my miss into a song with sweet romantic feeling "

I understood actually distance existed among us

I'll tell myself that don't think about it too much

Who has had her/his lover and deemed to separate each other what is a fact

I don’t know .

But I preferred to keep a silence

As matter of fact , I am dying to pour-in my views to you

Because I loved you and you let me found many meanings of life

I am always waiting for your call , did you ever feel ???

It’s a selfish think what I want to occupy (around) you with twenty-four hours

But for that thing I always feel disappointed

I know that sometime you are very love me

But sometimes you also let me very painful .

Not ,I think too much trivial matters around you that I can deep feeling

Feeling can't cheat anyone

I have never been thought what our love should be achieved in real life one day S

I just would like to do best when you around me ?

Let our love become affection

We all enter each other of the life

Come on, come on …..Honey

Remember , The true love without complaint or regret


-- Take my love to you, Honey

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楼主 | 发表于 2011-07-29 17:22发布于 07-29 17:22 较早前
Your heart liver who is the baby?
没有一个人,会一直一个人。

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发表于 2011-07-29 18:02发布于 07-29 18:02 较早前
我也看不明白 呵呵

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发表于 2011-07-31 19:27发布于 07-31 19:27 较早前
我试着翻译一下 让大家能看懂大致的意思

那些微妙的变化

使得我越来越爱你

不去想太多

告诉自己,爱你就已足够

有时会很孤单

独自一人想你

想知道 是否你也这样强烈地需要我

但是我知道 我不该太过奢望

无论是无尽的黎明或深夜里

还是在穿过街角的那一刹那

我想念的全是你

这些思念汇成一首歌

轻轻吟唱

其实我懂得的

距离终将会产生

我也会告诉自己不要想太多

不是不懂得

那些爱和分离的现实

但我宁愿盲目下去

其实想告诉你

因为爱你

我明白了生命的意义

我也无时无刻不在等你的电话

自私地想每分每秒地占有你

但是我却经常失望

我知道有时你很爱我

但是有时你也冷落我

不是我想太多 我能感觉到

感觉是不会骗人的

我从没想过要轰轰烈烈地爱情

我只是尽自己最大的努力

让爱情转化成亲情

让彼此成为对方不可或缺的一部分

加油 努力

爱真的是无怨无悔

---献给最深爱的你...

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发表于 2011-07-31 20:38发布于 07-31 20:38 较早前
很美很美的一首诗。

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发表于 2011-07-31 20:44发布于 07-31 20:44 较早前
回复 11# 冰天

哈哈 是我翻译的好?还是英文文本的好?

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发表于 2011-07-31 21:07发布于 07-31 21:07 较早前
回复 12# 大西洋中的鱼

你翻译的很好,水平很高,原文与你的翻译味道上有点差别

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发表于 2011-08-01 04:28发布于 08-01 04:28 较早前
回复 13# 冰天

呵呵

过奖过奖!
生活不是单行线,一条路走不通,你可以转弯。

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楼主 | 发表于 2011-08-01 20:04发布于 08-01 20:04 较早前
呵呵,其实开头还有一句,就是文章的题目。

I can feel

those subtle change...

每个人都有自己的理解。呵呵,我把当时写的时候的心情翻译出来吧。

我能感觉到

那些些微的变化

越来越爱你

不去想太多

告诉自己,这样爱你就足够

其实我也会孤单

在我一个人想你的时候

也很想知道,你是否也如此想念我

虽然我知道,我不能这么自私

在深夜,在清晨

在秒针淌过的每一个角落

带着所有的,关于对你的想念

谱写成歌

轻轻唱着

其实我知道距离会产生什么

我也告诉自己不要想太多

那些关于爱和分离的事实

并不是我不懂

只是我宁愿盲目

很想告诉你

因为爱你,让我找到生命的更多意义

无时无刻不在等你的电话响起

自私的想24小时拥有你

以致我总是失望

我知道你有时候很爱我

然而你也总是让我很无措

不是我想太多,我能感觉到

感觉骗不了人的

我从来不曾想过我们能轰轰烈烈一辈子

我只是想尽我所能

从爱情,变成亲情

我们将会成为彼此生命中不可或缺的一部分

加油,加油

好好爱一次,无怨无悔。

---献给我深爱的你。
没有一个人,会一直一个人。

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发表于 2011-08-03 03:59发布于 08-03 03:59 较早前
回复 15# yiliujinpin

还是楼主文笔好啊~~
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